tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post156715387152545462..comments2023-09-24T04:14:14.918-07:00Comments on Bronx to Boulder: I Could Never Have Imagined...Melaniehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15014066951851923567noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post-10359457061191562712011-12-16T08:59:51.433-08:002011-12-16T08:59:51.433-08:00OK, now I'm terrified for that kid. (I read th...OK, now I'm terrified for that kid. (I read the series backwards.) I absolutely love your use of dialogue. The way you reveal Alex's past through Kayla and Cameron's dialogue makes him plausible as a character.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post-25246460209706038912011-02-14T17:21:51.903-08:002011-02-14T17:21:51.903-08:00yay! I was right there in the car. Loved the descr...yay! I was right there in the car. Loved the description and your dialogue. <br /><br />visiting from RDCAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13214914707096410664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post-6034555635083076072011-02-14T07:58:28.100-08:002011-02-14T07:58:28.100-08:00Ooooh good one! At first I was confusing real lif...Ooooh good one! At first I was confusing real life until I figured out it was a RWH post.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12586581766383380976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post-73332291602283407992011-02-14T07:11:34.535-08:002011-02-14T07:11:34.535-08:00Wow - great story! My pulse picked up for sure! Th...Wow - great story! My pulse picked up for sure! The mark of a tale well told, I think.MrsJenBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10210080304270799102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post-7824407738016911152011-02-12T15:39:53.643-08:002011-02-12T15:39:53.643-08:00great job! glad to see you jumping in! hope you&...great job! glad to see you jumping in! hope you'll be back!Katiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03272418011408299181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post-21029037657732064092011-02-12T13:47:55.586-08:002011-02-12T13:47:55.586-08:00I love that they were both learning about Alex thr...I love that they were both learning about Alex through their conversation and able to give each other perspective on the man that they both clearly love so much.Jenniferhttp://whispatory.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post-69012498499691568622011-02-12T05:24:06.237-08:002011-02-12T05:24:06.237-08:00Excellent writing. Just enough dialogue and plenty...Excellent writing. Just enough dialogue and plenty of intrigue. I really enjoyed reading this story.Mrs.Mayhemhttp://www.motheringmayhem.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post-36014640737511040312011-02-11T23:17:35.260-08:002011-02-11T23:17:35.260-08:00This was great! I really loved the relationship sh...This was great! I really loved the relationship she was building with the teenaged son. It was honest and almost as a peer, you know? I loved how he could talk to her and really open up. It showed, without having to write it, that she's really accepted being a stepmom even if she never thought it would happen.<br /><br />She's also showing a little reluctance to dive into the relationship. It makes me want to know more about her and about Alex. Is she the grounded to his artistic?<br /><br />The only thing - and it's totally minor - that I would change is maybe delete one or two of the "suddenly's" halfway through.<br /><br />Other than that, great pacing, wonderful drama and a cliffhanging ending. Awesome.<br /><br />(Visiting from TRDC.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post-26648887337596041562011-02-11T21:58:18.683-08:002011-02-11T21:58:18.683-08:00I loved it Mel! I was completely into the storyli...I loved it Mel! I was completely into the storyline.<br /><br />Karen T.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post-30284035164278242482011-02-11T20:58:25.622-08:002011-02-11T20:58:25.622-08:00GF, this was a gorgeous read! I was right there wi...GF, this was a gorgeous read! I was right there with you- puling for the relationship, the love and the memories. And the "ending?" Absolutely perfect!Galit Breenhttp://tcjewfolk.com/author/galitbreen/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post-61027441367729408872011-02-11T20:15:11.860-08:002011-02-11T20:15:11.860-08:00Yikes!!! That totally sucked me in. Great jobYikes!!! That totally sucked me in. Great jobMultitaskMummahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06429892369724489105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post-79226189589969619212011-02-11T20:06:41.918-08:002011-02-11T20:06:41.918-08:00I'm glad I came here after you've confesse...I'm glad I came here after you've confessed to a happy ending!<br /><br />I was worried about Kayla and Cameron, and Alex, where ever he is during this outing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post-46924080828243785332011-02-11T16:18:30.717-08:002011-02-11T16:18:30.717-08:00I know! I didn't realize how scary the ending ...I know! I didn't realize how scary the ending came across as I was writing this piece. I think that's because I already knew the outcome (which is not written here) and its definitely positive. :-))Melaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15014066951851923567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33734418945629290.post-10723122888605761012011-02-11T15:43:36.078-08:002011-02-11T15:43:36.078-08:00Good Lord, woman! A VERY scary ending! I love the ...Good Lord, woman! A VERY scary ending! I love the way the memory of the parents and their love makes her realize she has that kind of love with Alex - and Cameron. I hope it's not too late! Ack!Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14025221975648580117noreply@blogger.com